I just read it and I thought it was OK but a little long on BS and little short on real info. I would like to have seen some more general (and technical) info about the equipment he used. Did he make personal alterations to the rifle? How did he choose the ammo he used? Was it off the shelf issue stuff? Did the ROE's dictate when and which rifle/ammo combo he used.
I read it pretty fast and may have missed something .
How come it is always too something... Too hot, too cold, too soon, too late, too much, too little, too deep, too shallow, but always "too" something.